Help
so there is a small girl (around 8 or so)
she gets some kind of sickness
so her parents take her to the hospital
the doctor says that she has incurable disease and that she will die young
so her parents take her out of school and she becomes homeschooled. she is sick often and can only leave the house when she is better only once a week because of her health
so she grows up this way
and 10 years later (she is around 18 or so)
on one of her days where she is feeling better
she goes out
and she meets a handsome boy
the boy is very friendly nice and outgoing
the two fall in love (in 1 day!)
he takes her around the city and shows her things shes never seen ( DO NOT INSERT JOKE HERE)
they start a relationship
later she gets a mild fever because she was not supposed to stay out so long. so he takes her back. and she is full of love
the next day her fever does not become better. her parents worried take her to the doctor.
the doctor tells her she will not live much longer (like 10 days!)
however her new boyfriend does not know
so she feels extremely guilty
so she avoids him.
she doesnt want him to have to go through her death
finally he confronts her somehow
and she breaks up with him
dejected he leaves
and she is alone again
so she cries and cries
and she realizes that it wasnt worth it
so one last time she leaves and tries to find her love-r
she searches around the town for many hours looking for him
finally she makes it to the place where (insert sentimental place here)
her fever is very bad and when she sees him she is very weak
he walks up to her and she falls down
he gos own to scoop her up
and she tells him how she always love him and how that was her happiest moments in her life
and how she is very sick an was always lonely.
he holds her confused and sad
he reaches over to kiss her but her breathing has already stopped and she is dead
the end ;-;
Needs revisions
Now to incorporate in Lunia.. What would be the places at? Hospital? 
